Saturday, February 3, 2007

A Poem For Her...

Leave it alone.. It's my first poem.. No let me rephrase that.. It's my first post that's a poem.. :P
Before anything else,
I want to say that I'm not obsessed,
Or so nearly depressed.
Please hear what I have to say
Because everyday, I don't feel this way.
The truth is I've never felt this before
And I surely like to feel it some more.
I know this might be absurd,
But we rarely speak a word.
What I can do is just to stare.
Looking at you, I just can’t bear.
This might seem not true
But I just couldn’t stop thinking of you.

You are my first thought in the morning;
And I continue thinking of you till evening.
How I wish we could do things together
Like watch a movie or at least drink water.
There are things that I want to tell you
But talking to you I just can’t do.

Sometimes you might see me singing.
Songs help me express what I’m feeling.
All these are what I feel
And I assure you that all these are real.

11 comments:

Mikki said...

wow! go DODONG!!! grbe.......

vachael said...

O.M.G cesie!!! lantaran na au ha... imong mga dramas na sa few peepz lng nmo g share, here na... nka post pa!!! hahahaha...

well... i wish u luck! sana d au ka very bothered... luoy.. tsk tsk tsk...

as requested ng comment ko, sir heheheheheh..jawk..:p

:D

vachael said...

ai yah! pahabol... nice poem! :)

Cesar said...

hahaha! weee! really? nice? hahaha... wow... i've never felt so, uh.. poetic?

vaN said...

U made this???


You are my first thought in the morning;
And I continue thinking of you till evening.
How I wish we could do things together
Like watch a movie or at least drink water.
There are things that I want to tell you
But talking to you I just can’t do.


OMG! Higugma na jud ni Ces? Go loverboy! ;P

Cesar said...

lol ninz... ^^

ace said...

try lang...

ace said...

wahahahaha finally i know na..
labay lang ces...

by the way nice poem na pa omg mo si vachael and nina!!! hahaha kinsay dodong? diba si dean na?

Cesar said...

^^ thanks Ace! It's really nice to hear good stuff about the fruits of your labor.. (was that the correct idiom?)

bernard said...

Yahooooooooo! Go Mr. Einstein! ahahahahahaha

Monching said...

CHARMOOOOOO- OOSSS Dodong, este Cesar!!! Finally, another poet... :p

At the spark of LOVE,
Everyone becomes a poet



- Plato